My excerpt "My Courtship by Lord Magus: A Diary" is up at the Eggplant Literary Productions Library. Click on the book to read:
Up to sixteen crits on "The Tanuki-Kettle" and it's not even the weekend. At this rate, I'm going to have a massively unwieldy number to deal with by the time the week is over. Hmm.
I do see a shortcoming of my "don't comment on the intended audience in the notes" ploy. I'm getting suggestions from folks who think I should lengthen the story to elaborate on the characters and background. I need to cut, not add! Blerg.